lunes, 29 de noviembre de 2010

My favourite place

My favourite place is matalascañas beach, Spain. It`s great .I go to matalascaña every August wiht my parents. There is a large beach and sometime there are firework. We usually go to swimming and other times go to play football.
What your favourite place??

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  1. My favourite place is matalascañas (CAPITAL LETTER) beach, Spain. It`s great .I go to matalascaña (CAPITAL LETTER, MATALASCAÑAS)every August wiht (WITH)my parents. There is a large beach and sometime (SOMETIMES) there are firework (FIREWORKS in plural)We usually go to (no TO) swimming and other times go to play football.
    What (what's) your favourite place??

    too short and too many mistakes!! :(

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